๐ŸŽง You may have edited OUT your BEST scene ๐Ÿ˜ฉ


Hi Reader!

There's probably a scene in your manuscript where nothing really happens.

No dialogue. No confrontation. No big reveal.

๐Ÿช‘ Your hero is just alone. Sitting somewhere. Thinking.

And you've read that scene back and wondered if it's pulling its weight, if it's worth the word count or just bloating your story. ๐Ÿค”

Maybe you've already cut one like it. Or marked it "revisit, possibly fluff". โ˜๏ธ

๐ŸŽฌ In my workshops and courses, I talk about how every scene needs a purpose.

If you can't clearly state WHY a scene is important for your story's:

๐ŸŒฑ hero growth arc

๐Ÿ›๏ธ romantic tropes

๐Ÿ’ž romance beats

๐Ÿ—ป or plot structure...

you should either cut it or revise it.

And this week's podcast episode ๐ŸŽง๐Ÿ‘‡ is about the scenes that look like fluff but AREN'T.

Because the quiet moment where your hero chooses NOT to do what her chapter-one self would have done is where the real magic lives. โœจ

It's where your reader can't put the book away, even after she's stopped reading the scene that made her tear up. ๐Ÿ˜ฎโ€๐Ÿ’จ

Spend 30 minutes ๐ŸŽง of your time with me today, and I'll walk you through how one scene can change the feel of your big splashy ending from forced to earned.

Because without this ONE moment, the HEA at the end will fall flat, no matter how hard you try to punch it up.

๐ŸŽงโšก๐Ÿ‘‡

โ€‹โ€‹Listen hereโ€‹!

โ˜๏ธ๐Ÿ’กโฃ๏ธ

๐Ÿ’–

Sue Brown-Moore

Story Coach & Developmental Editor for Romance Writers

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โšก๐Ÿ“† In the episode, I talk about the Turning Point Test and an article that explains the 4 stages of the Turning Point Moment. Those are coming soon! The article drops next Tuesday, and your May E2E module will be ready on May 1 (which is where you'll learn the Turning Point Test). I can't wait for you to check them out!


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Sue Brown-Moore

The heart of your story is in the hero's growth as a person. Learn how to start plotting the RIGHT story from your very first draft by digging deep into WHAT is holding your protagonist back and WHY they choose to become their best self. Sue's techniques break down storytelling in simple, intuitive ways that traditional writing methods often muddy. Stop wasting time spinning your creative wheels and start writing stories readers will remember... WITHOUT having to rewrite the story a million times.

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