The heart of your story is in the hero's growth as a person. Learn how to start plotting the RIGHT story from your very first draft by digging deep into WHAT is holding your protagonist back and WHY they choose to become their best self. Sue's techniques break down storytelling in simple, intuitive ways that traditional writing methods often muddy. Stop wasting time spinning your creative wheels and start writing stories readers will remember... WITHOUT having to rewrite the story a million times.
We disagreed. On camera. Repeatedly. ๐
Miranda and I disagreed. On camera. More than once. ๐ And I'm not talking about the similar-but-different style of disagreement. I'm talking "Are we reading the same book??" disagreement. ๐ She prefers traditional, formal fantasy voice. I loved Fourth Wing's modern slang. (That book felt written for me.) ๐ I loved the Xaden bonus chapters. She thought the story didn't need them. ๐๏ธ And our POV preferences for romance could not be more opposite. But the whole time we were recording, I couldn't stop smiling. ๐ฅฐ Because neither of us is wrong. While yes, we're both book coaches, and we have decades of combined romance obsession between us, when we read the same record-breaking book, we disagreed on almost every discussion point. ๐ That's because, craft aside, we are two COMPLETELY different readers. And we brought our own reading and life experiences into the book with us. Your reader brings part of herself to your story too. ๐ There's no one "right" way to tell a story. There's just the story YOU want to tell, written that way on purpose. So when one critique partner says your slow burn drags and a beta reader begs you to slow it down... they might both be right. For themselves. Your job isn't to obey the loudest opinion. It's to know your own story well enough to choose the best-for-you story path. ๐ช ๐ฅ๏ธ In the Fourth Wing Novel Deep Dive, we also get into: ๐ค Our unfiltered take on Violet's constant injuries (and whether her frailty works for the story), ๐ The ONE thing we wholeheartedly agreed on (how bullying is empowered in the book ๐), ๐ง And why my audiobook experience and Miranda's reading experience felt significantly different. (Narrators matter, friendโฃ๏ธ) ๐ Tune in and watch us (lovingly) duke it out! Already saved the video from Friday's email? This is your sign to bump it to the top of your "YouTube hole" queue. โ ๐ฅโก๐ โWatch the Fourth Wing Novel Deep Dive here! โ๏ธ๐กโฃ๏ธ
P.S. If you struggle with making true-to-you decisions, especially when other people give conflicting feedback, check out Enemies To Experts. Because the "right" answer rarely comes from someone else. Until you can understand the WHATs and WHYs of your hero characters, you'll always be reliant on other people's opinions. That's โ๏ธ the skill we practice inside Enemies To Experts. One editor-in-your-pocket lesson each month. One exercise on YOUR manuscript. Zero critique pressure. ๐ฐ Which feels right? ๐ฑ๏ธ๐ ๐ E2E is for me! ๐ฅฐ ๐ I need to learn more. ๐ค |
Sue Brown-Moore
The heart of your story is in the hero's growth as a person. Learn how to start plotting the RIGHT story from your very first draft by digging deep into WHAT is holding your protagonist back and WHY they choose to become their best self. Sue's techniques break down storytelling in simple, intuitive ways that traditional writing methods often muddy. Stop wasting time spinning your creative wheels and start writing stories readers will remember... WITHOUT having to rewrite the story a million times.
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