The Monday morning I want for you πŸ’


Hi Reader!

Close your eyes for a second (okay, AFTER you read this part πŸ˜…) and picture this:

It's Monday morning (or Friday night or whenever you like to edit). You open your manuscript to that scene. The one that's been fighting you for weeks.

πŸ’‘ And instead of the dread, your first thought is, "I know what this scene needs."

Not hope. Not another guess that you'll rewrite next weekend.

You know WHAT is wrong and WHY. ⚑

That kind of knowing ☝️ doesn't hit you as one giant lightning bolt.

πŸ’ͺ You have to develop the muscle, one small skill at a time.

✍️ And then you have to practice it, over and over, until it is instinct.

And then you learn the next small skill, and the next, and the next, until suddenly, your brain and your heart and your fingers are all working together.

When you recognize that moment ☝️, you're ready to start editing your own work intuitively. And that's a skill that can take even professional editors years to develop on their own.

It's also the moment I celebrate with every writer in my programs.

Because when revision stops feeling like a threat or a chore or something you dread (because you don't know what you don't know, right?)...

Your whole job of writing romance starts feeling fun and fulfilling. 😍

You remember what started you on this journey to begin with. You know why you make the "WHAT" decisions that you do.

βŒ› The heavy hours that used to dominate your schedule turn into free time.

Imagine if Saturday mornings meant β˜• coffee and reading a book purely for pleasure. πŸ“š

Or a dinner with the family 🍽️ where you can just be present, instead of mentally untangling your hero's dark moment under the table.

⚑ That's the REAL payoff of learning the micro-skills of self-editing.

Yes, your manuscripts start getting stronger, right from the very start. But the best part is the peace. 🌈

The knowledge that the story you are writing is the right one, and you know EXACTLY how to make it sing. πŸ’

And Enemies To Expertsβ€”one tiny bite-sized exercise at a timeβ€”is where you learn those skills. (Scroll down to learn more.)

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I have a question for you and I genuinely want you to hit reply and answer:

What's one thing you wish non-romance-writers understood about writing romance?

Hit reply right now πŸ–±οΈ and let me know πŸ’¬.

I read every answer personally. And I honestly want to know. πŸ₯°

This is something I talked about last week at the RWA National convention, and it's important. Because you're not alone in feeling this way, and voicing the thing that is silently holding you back can make that weight a little lighter.

So chat me back and share your thoughts with me. πŸ‘©β€β€οΈβ€πŸ‘©

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Sue Brown-Moore

Story Coach & Developmental Editor for Romance Writers

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If you want to get started building those essential storytelling skills right now, join Enemies To Experts and do your first bite-sized skill exercise.

I built E2E for the romance writer who's ❌ done guessing at what's wrong with your manuscript.

πŸ˜… If that sounds like you ☝️, and you're ready to do something about it today...


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Sue Brown-Moore

The heart of your story is in the hero's growth as a person. Learn how to start plotting the RIGHT story from your very first draft by digging deep into WHAT is holding your protagonist back and WHY they choose to become their best self. Sue's techniques break down storytelling in simple, intuitive ways that traditional writing methods often muddy. Stop wasting time spinning your creative wheels and start writing stories readers will remember... WITHOUT having to rewrite the story a million times.

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